Video Retro Scotch Eggs

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• Great entry positive

• Good hook > by mentioning it easy

• Yellow subtitles are better

• B-roll timing is good

• Type write animation is great

• Good action on showing the egg process implementation with speedup

• great top down shot meat and egg secure part

• Zoom in and out repetitive

• reflection of the back distracting

• Type writer mood and modern kitchen does not line up ( old and new )

• Story should be at the start to build curiosity

3 act structure is not connected ( incident, climax,resolution)

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