Video Retro Scotch Eggs
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Great entry positive
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Good hook > by mentioning it easy
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Yellow subtitles are better
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B-roll timing is good
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Type write animation is great
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Good action on showing the egg process implementation with speedup
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great top down shot meat and egg secure part
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Zoom in and out repetitive
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reflection of the back distracting
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Type writer mood and modern kitchen does not line up ( old and new )
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Story should be at the start to build curiosity
3 act structure is not connected ( incident, climax,resolution)
Imported from rifaterdemsahin.com · 2024